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(WIP) And The Ashes Remain- ATAR
« on: June 05, 2015, 11:08:50 PM »
(Ok I wasn't suppose to be posting NOT EVEN a wip before chapter one is complete but I had some issues with my files and I'm afraid to lose the Prologue since I can't even edit it for some reason, so since I'm messing around with the files might aswell post it as a preview XD. Maybe I will leave this one for the rest of the story. Also trying out dividers.)

And The Ashes Remain

Prologue


You know those stories they tell the little kids? They are really fun, until they are real, like they always wished. It's fun to see the character lines until you are the one screaming but nobody can hear you. It's exciting to listen to the final battle until you are the one in the middle of a gory war.  Sometimes it's sad to listen to the end of the story, but it's more depression if it doesn't have an end, if the pain doesn't have an end. It's horrible when the character is crying because their loved ones died. But it's worse if they have to look at them everyday, knowing that it's their fault they're dead.
They put all those stupid "happiness" ideas in kids minds. But they don't tell them those horrible things that really happen, and make them painfully learn from experience.
Sometimes I just wish I could go back in time...


The night was cold. Only the faint sound of the wind and leaves could be heard.
Beside the river a black and white wolf could be spotted. She was mainly white with stripe like markings on her back and black "socks" markings on her legs and small spots under her eyes, which looked like freckles.  Her pale green eyes lost in her thoughts as her expression didn't show even a bit of emotion. Suddently a weird figure got closer to her. It was a canine like ghost creature, with a faint black and white colored pelt aswell. The female wolf turned her head and their gaze met.

"Don't even think about it..." the female said with a cold voice as the ghost wolf looked at her amused.
" Daww, don't be so grumpy sister, I wasn't going to scare you." he said with a goofy and sarcastic voice.
"Yeah right. Why don't you just leave me alone, I'm thinking."
" Oh so, your brain is so slow that you need to stay hours thinking about something smart?" He said grining.
"I swear, if you were alive, I would have killed you already! Leave me alone, that's the only thing I ask for. I need to refresh my mind." As she finished her sentence she runned to the opposite direction of the male ghost like wolf. His expression changed quickly as the female left.
"You are never gonna learn are you...?" he said as he flew of.



Yeah there are probably some mistakes but now I can fix them hopefully.
faun . she/they
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