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Media => Art => Topic started by: RakshaWw on July 16, 2014, 10:45:22 AM

Title: Help me practice artz
Post by: RakshaWw on July 16, 2014, 10:45:22 AM
I used to draw heaps in 2011 and 2012 although last year I barely drew at all and this year I've only finished like 4 things and they're all lazily done.
Even though I can see improvement over the years, I don't think I'm improving enough because of how little time I spend practicing.

I give everyone here permission to edit/red line my Vaporeon or Dog(in the Latest (2014) section) drawings so if something looks weird as in the eyes, paw size, tail shape, etc you can try and fix that up for me so I can see what I could've done to make it look better. I'm also willing to give out the Vaporeon .PSD file(it'll open with both SAI and Photoshop) so you can colour or shade it better.
Just ask for the file and I'll PM it to you.
You may not watermark it, claim it as your own or upload it onto art sites such as deviantArt regardless of how much you edit the original drawing. Upload it to image sites such as tinypic or imgur and post it here.

Once I see your changes to it and what you think looks good, I think it'll help me out heaps for future art.

Click and drag the big images into your browser tabs to see them properly.


2011 Art Improvements
(http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/081/2/e/2011_art_chart_by_rakshaww-d4tmybg.png)
2012 Art Improvements
(http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/357/0/d/2012_art_chart_by_rakshaww-d5ovfkz.png)
Some From 2013
(http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/150/a/9/happy_birthday_rimisa_by_rakwhitewish-d675ir5.png)

(http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/109/7/8/just_move_your_little_rump__by_rakwhitewish-d628a1g.png)

(http://th02.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/236/2/e/bc_by_rakwhitewish-d6jizah.png)

(http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/355/2/3/merry_christmas_fishderp_by_rakwhitewish-d6yrqa8.png)

Latest (2014) Click them for full image
(http://i.imgur.com/ozogd5Q.png) (http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2014/002/2/2/sylveon_s_swift_attack_by_rakwhitewish-d70hgxd.png) (January) Pose Reference (http://porygoon.deviantart.com/)

(http://i.imgur.com/FxP4wQO.png) (http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2014/046/2/8/shiny_umbreon_by_rakwhitewish-d76k23y.png) (February) No Reference Used

(http://i.imgur.com/YnFU3uq.png) (http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2014/081/3/9/random_dog_by_rakwhitewish-d7b5fyd.png) (March) No Reference Used

(http://i.imgur.com/yM6sGBt.png) (http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/197/c/4/vaporeonsurf_by_rakshaww-d7qwghu.png) (July) No Reference Used



Please note that I am not currently taking requests for OCs and I never do commissions although feel free to request I do some art of existing movie/book/etc characters such as Simba, Balto, Pikachu, etc
Title: Re: Help me practice artz
Post by: Manapotion on July 16, 2014, 12:50:21 PM
Rak ur Drawings are Amazing you could better learn me how to draw that good xd. My Drawings are like poop :c
Title: Re: Help me practice artz
Post by: City on July 16, 2014, 04:33:44 PM
o-o...
Title: Re: Help me practice artz
Post by: Zaroque on July 16, 2014, 06:35:26 PM
Try avoid doing one-worded posts City (:

Shaa you've really improved, especially your stuff on dA. If you've got more dogs I'd love to help you perfect them bby
Title: Re: Help me practice artz
Post by: Vivian And Everyone on July 16, 2014, 11:38:26 PM
Rak ur Drawings are Amazing you could better learn me how to draw that good xd. My Drawings are like poop :c
no they aren't booldyrose... did you draw your proflie picture, its awesome, sorry that its the only proof I have but still you are so focused that you have to be learning at least. ;D oh and I am starting the art request for you and your friend!
Title: Re: Help me practice artz
Post by: Kruxx on July 17, 2014, 12:18:24 AM
Your art is amazing, Rak. You truly have improved quite a lot.

I just... Hngn. Your style is fabulous. -Strokes thread.- I'd love to see more artz coming from you, and I'm more than willing to help you out. ;-; You may PM me the Vaporeon .PSD file if you'd like. But to be honest, that drawing looks perfect just the way it is.
Title: Re: Help me practice artz
Post by: Blu on July 17, 2014, 12:23:03 AM
Amazin dude
Title: Re: Help me practice artz
Post by: War on July 18, 2014, 07:56:05 PM
Sha....teach me...Senpai..
Title: Re: Help me practice artz
Post by: Ganja-Shark on July 19, 2014, 06:42:12 PM
i could redline some if you want :>
Title: Re: Help me practice artz
Post by: SlayerWolf on July 20, 2014, 04:25:40 PM
I love your Rimisha art so much! Its so cute and lovely <3
Title: Re: Help me practice artz
Post by: Adeen on July 23, 2014, 09:51:44 PM
Study anatomyyyyyyyyyy.
Title: Re: Help me practice artz
Post by: Dutchval on July 24, 2014, 02:49:18 PM
CHANGE
NOTHING
I love your art the way it is <3