I recently made a preset, so I think I can help.
I don't know why you posted the notepad named Campaigns, you shouldn't edit that.
Your Preset.campaign file seems right, just replace Unit_Create=PLAYER,Fickle,Body.... with Unit_Create=PLAYER,Unit,Body....
Then the other file you need to edit is located in game>media>materials>scripts>Presets named 1.PS_Character, here you change all the words Character to your presets name (Fickle). Then after editing change the files name to PS_Fickle.
Other than that I can just say that make sure you saved all your texture files in the preset folder and named them correctly. (FickleHeadTex.png, FickleEyeTex.png, ect.)
Hope you can see your preset now, the real work starts when you notice all your textures are in the wrong place!!